Wonderful Teacher
IntroWriting Fri 1-2
Prof.John Bahk-Halberg
200702742 HyeRi Lee
I was such a arrogant student in my sixteen. I was about to graduate my middle school, and finding some good English academies because my father wanted me to study there. However, I thought that there was nobody to teach me as a teacher, because teachers are some annoying people who are just shouting "To study hard!" everyday. Moreover, because I struggled against an Korean teacher for 3 years, I was sick and tired of teachers. Anyway I found an academy and started to go there, and there was a most weird teacher I ever met. My opinion about teachers was always correct, I thought again.
What is worse was that he was my homeroom teacher. I was an adolescent girl, so it was hard to understand his exhilarating, too exhilarating everyday. He always laughed loudly, and even in his English class, he seemed very excited because of the thought that he could teach us the world of English, which is so marvelous. At first, I really hated to see in my academy, but before I was aware, I became to enjoy his class. Indeed, he was a good english teacher because I never forget what I learned at that time until now. He knew how to make students feel fun when they study English.
Because of his effort, the only subject I'd liked to study was English when I was an high school student. I felt really sorry when I heard that he had to go to America, but I never thought that it was the end of the relationship between he and me. Now it has been about 6 years, but I'm still in communication with him. Also, I'm majoring in English, so I think he is the most be influential teacher in my life. It was lucky that I met him in my adolescent age.
what i like this essay is well regulated paragraph and not too long or not too short. moreove in my knows area, in your first paragraph i think you have to more indentify your main idea, and i think that is too long that you did not interested with english. the other way you have to give more example about your topic. thanks
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ReplyDeleteI was such a arrogant student in my sixteen. I was about to graduate from my middle school, and finding some good English academies because my father wanted me to study there. However, I thought that there was nobody to teach me as a teacher, because teachers are some annoying people who are just shouting "To study hard!" everyday. Moreover, because I struggled against a Korean teacher for 3 years, I was sick and tired of teachers. Anyway I found an academy and started to go there, and there was a most weird teacher I ever met. My opinion about teachers was always correct, I thought again.
What is worse was that he was my homeroom teacher. I was an adolescent girl, so it was hard to understand his exhilarating, too exhilarating every day. He always laughed loudly, and even in his English class, he seemed very excited because of the thought that he could teach us the world of English, which is so marvelous. At first, I really hated to see in my academy, but before I was aware, I became to enjoy his class. Indeed, he was a good English teacher because I never forget what I learned at that time until now. He knew how to make students feel fun when they study English.
Because of his effort, the only subject I'd liked to study was English when I was a high school student. I felt really sorry when I heard that he had to go to America, but I never thought that it was the end of the relationship between him and me. Now it has been about 6 years, but I'm still in communication with him. Also, I'm majoring in English, so I think he is the most influential teacher in my life. It was lucky that I met him in my adolescent age.