201001043 So Young Na
Week 2 Assignment
My greatest thing
Whereever I go, there is one thing that I never forget to bring with me; my iPod Touch. iPod Touch is my greatest thing, in other words, one of my most important thing. First, I seriously enjoy listening to music when I am at home and when I am out. Listening to music makes me feel alive, happy and joyful, so without music, my daily life would be very boring. Therefore, it is essential for me to listen to music of my favorite singer everyday, especially when I am moving from place to place. My iPod Touch satisfies my need to listen to music very successfully. The day I forget to bring iPod is the worst day and I would feel very depressed and gloomy without listening to music. Moreover, my iPod Touch also has the function of calender, memo and schedule. These functions able me to keep up with my schedule and write down assignments and must-not-forget-to-dos. My iPod is just a mp3 player, but it has various function that I need in my daily life.
In my knows area i think you use of grammar is very good. But when i was reading your text i found that you explane too much about that you like music, but your title is the great things, i think you have to explane why the iPod is the great things talk much about the iPod fuctions. Great Job^^ see ya~
ReplyDeleteI totally agree with your thinking about that iPod Touch is the greatest thing. I also like to hear the music at the morning in subway. You write really great but I think that you have forgot to put 'not' at the last sentence. And also I think that you should have write more about why you think the iPod is the greatest.
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