Eating is a huge part of my life. I love eating. Whatever I do, wherever I go, I always think of what food to eat. For me it is too hard to choose only one food that I strongly like, because each food has its own unique taste. But If I should choose one food I like, I would choose Ramen.
There are quite many types of Ramen these days. Soybean paste Ramen, Curry Ramen, U-dong Ramen, Kim-chi Ramen and so on. I enjoy tasting all of these, but I like classic Ramen the most. The flavor that everybody can enjoy.
Japan has a great variety of Ramen as well. They are quite different from Korean Ramen. Japanese Ramen is little bit greasy because of big chunks of meat they put in. I love that huge piece of pork! On the other hand, Korean Ramen is spicier. I really like both. When I visited Japan on vacation, I ate Ramen more than five times in three days.
Simple, Easy, and Tasty. These are the three big symbols of Ramen. These are the reasons why I like Ramen. I hope I can eat Ramens all over the world someday.
1. What I like about this piece of writing is that it is easy to read and understand. You introduced the kinds of ramen well.
ReplyDelete2. Your main point seems to be the several kinds of ramen and the reason why you like them.
3. 'I hope I can eat Ramens all over the world someday' line struck me as powerful, because I feel that there is one hundred percent truth in it.
4. In my opinion, if you add more specific description of what each ramen tastes, your paragraphs will be more interesting and make readers want to eat ramen.
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ReplyDeleteThe former comment that I made was another person's feedback. Sorry^^;;
ReplyDeleteWhat I like about this piece of writing is that you explained the characteristics of Japanese and Korean Ramen.
Your main point seems to be that you really like Ramen.
"I love that huge piece of pork!" struck me because I could know why you like Japanese Ramen.
Maybe you can improve the sentence "The flavor that everybody can enjoy", because it is not a complete sencence.
I think your essay is written with proper sentences in general.
Thanks ^^
Eating is a huge part of my life. I love eating. Whatever I do, wherever I go, I always think of what food to eat. For me it is too hard to choose only one food that I strongly like, because each food has its own unique taste. But If I should choose one food I like the best, I would choose ramen.
ReplyDeleteThere are quite many types of ramen these days like . Soybean paste ramen, Curry ramen, U-dong ramen, Kim-chi ramen and so on. I enjoy all of these, but I like classic ramen the most.
Japan has a great variety of ramen as well. They are quite different from Korean ramen. Japanese ramen is a bit greasy, because big chunks of meat are added. I love those huge pieces of pork! On the other hand, Korean ramen is spicier. However, I really like both. When I visited Japan during my summer vacation, I ate ramen more than five times in three days.
Simple, Easy, and Tasty. These best represent ramen. As the world become faster and faster, ramen becomes more famous, too. I hope I can eat our ramen all over the world someday.