I can not point my strongly like food. Because I am really can eat and too much. But among them the name of Malatang cant leave me. Which is chinese food and from part of Sichuan province in china. That food mix kinds of vegetable and noodle make spicy like korean jjamppong, But there are different spicy flavor. When I live in china I eat Malatang almost everyday that's why I got serious disease with stomach and went to hospital got lots of pills. And because I really like malatang I can find that anywhere even hough in korea.
Not only like or dislike we have to eat everything except bad healthy food. And which is your strongly like food is bad healty food, you have to change.
From HyeRi To HongHua
ReplyDeleteWhat I like about this piece of writing is that I could newly know the Chinese food that you explained. I never know heared about that, so it was interesting.
Your main point seems to be that you don't have strongly like or dislike food.
The sentence that you got serious disease with stomach and went to hospital god lots of pills struck me because I could know how you like Malatang.
The word "Sundae" was little confusing because I understood it as a kind of an ice cream at first.
The one change you could make that would make the biggest improvement in this piece of writing is that you cannot use capital letters in the middle of the sentences, like after the comma.
Thanks ^^
Your essay is interesting, because I didn’t know Malatang. I think you describe Malatang well by comparing with Jjamppong. However, I’m little confused about your main point of this essay. I think it will be better if you strongly show your main point in the introduction part. I think ‘onece’ should be changed to ‘once’. In addition, adding some words in the conclusion part helps your essay more clearly.
ReplyDeleteI don't have strongly like food or strongly dislike food. Because I can enjoy all of nutrition food even though which flavor I don't like, that is viscera especially liver. when I eat sundae they always ask me want add some viscera, therefore because of they always asking I decided try to eat for once. As expected I almost throw up But mother told me these viscera good for health, as result I eat them, but I don't want eat again.
ReplyDeleteI can not point my strongly like food. Because I am really can eat and too much. But among them the name of Malatang cant leave me. Which is chinese food and from part of Sichuan province in china. That food mix kinds of vegetable and noodle make spicy like korean jjamppong, But there are different spicy flavor. When I live in china I eat Malatang almost everyday that's why I got serious disease with stomach and went to hospital got lots of pills. And because I really like malatang I can find that anywhere even hough in korea.
Not only like or dislike we have to eat everything except bad healthy food. And which is your strongly like food is bad healty food, you have to change.