Tuesday, September 28, 2010

pg. 41 essay first draft Hyesu Ahn 200601825

 

             Whenever I say that my favorite food is beef intestines, almost every foreigner says that they can't believe. Even some people don`t know what intestines are. When I explain what intestines are, many people say it's disgusting. Even they hate my taste.

 

 Yes, beef intestines look disgusting but they are so delicious and they smell so tasty. Some say that intestines are not clean food, but it's not true. They are very clean food because people wash it very strictly. And they have a lot of collagen which is good for women's skin. Also intestines are really good for men's stamina.

 

             The reason that I strongly like intestines is not only they are good for health, but also it's because of the atmosphere. I eat intestines always with my true friends at night. We have some serious conversation and we release our stress or sadness through that time. The atmosphere makes intestines' flavor better and the conversation we have makes me feel better. That's why I like to eat intestines.

 

1 comment:

  1. you need to more supporting sentenses about why do you like beef intestines and also explain what is the beef intestines. and i think your conclusion better than the other paragraph. you explain why you like intestines and say about intestines good way. say sorry about my comment just in my opinion^^ thanks

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