201002971 Jang Jiyun
Friends in HUFS.
I want to write about my friends in HUFS.
I first met them on March. Although I've only been friends with them for about 6 months, they've already become a very important part of my life.
The first person who is great is my best friend, Jang Jun Hwa. She is a sophomore in EIT. She is one of the most considerate friends. I love spending time with her. We have similar taste of music, clothing style, food, and people. We also like the same celebrities. It is so good to talk with her. I can always be energetic because of her.
Next, the boy name Im Hee Dong. He is a freshman in EIT. He is so funny and creative. He knows many funny things and has many interesting topics. I enjoy the time with him very much. He makes me laugh all the time. Although sometimes he drives me crazy because of his childish behaviors, I like him very much.
And lastly, Han Gustavo. He is also a freshman in EIT. When I first saw him, I was very impressed. He acted like a girl little bit, and I felt very interested about his gesture and way of speaking. He loves chatting. And i love chatting, too. So when we start talking, we can't stop.
I want to have good relationship with them forever.
In my knows area i think you use of grammar is very good. But when i was reading your text i found that you explane too much about that you like music, but your title is the great things, i think you have to explane why the iPod is the great things talk much about the iPod fuctions. Great Job^^ see ya~
ReplyDeletesorry about the upside massage, i confuse about the other text, but i dont know how to delete. Say sorry again. Ok let's talk about your comment. when i read your text which is very constructed and feeling so good. And your grammar also great~^^. But i think your conclusion short, need more wrrite. Good luck~
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