Week 3 Assignment
201001043 So Young Na
Chicken sandwich
In my senior year, when I was preparing for college entrance examination, I had a very difficult time keeping good condition. Staying in good condition was very important in order to concentrate hard when studying. As I was very tired of studying everyday unable to do what I want, it was not easy to maintain good condition. To my surprise, however, there was one thing that made me feel energetic and eager to study. That is chicken sandwich, which is my favorite food.
There is only one reason to how chicken sandwich helped me study harder and became my favorite food. It is fantastic taste of chicken sandwich. The taste of it really stimulated my desire to eat delicious food in the toughest time of my life. It is very important to note that at the time I was in a very tired and harsh situation due to toughness of studying for college entrance examination. I desperately needed something for a diversion and that was chicken sandwich. One day, I decided to eat sandwich for dinner before heading to English class after school. So, I bought a chicken sandwich in Parrisbagutte and ate it right away. At first bite, I did not recognize, but at second bite, I was totally obsessed by the taste of it and at the moment it became my favorite food. Tenderness of chicken, freshness of vegetables, coolness of tomatoes, and softness of bread amazed me instantly. I could understood how delicious food can make people feel happy. The tasty sandwich seriously made me happy and joyful. This could be possible because I appreciate the quality, or the taste of food rather than the quantity. From that day, I constantly ate chicken sandwich and could study hard due to happy feelings.
Although it is quite an irony how I found my favorite food during my toughest time, chicken sandwich helped me a lot when I was preparing for the college entrance examination. Right now, I still am addicted to it and still desire to eat it at least twice a week. In deed, Parris baguette is the place I visit the most during week days, since chicken sandwich of it is the most delicious in my personal opinion.
1. What I like about this piece of writing is your introduction. I felt the same way when I was in high school. In addition, I was surprised that one thing that made you feel eager to study was chicken sandwich. You're so cute!
ReplyDelete2. Your main point seems to be only reason why the chicken sandwich became your favorite food, which is fantastic taste of it.
3. 'Tenderness of chicken, freshness of vegetables, coolness of tomatoes, and softness of bread amazed me instantly' line struck me as powerful, because this sentence is like rap lyrics. Its rhyme help me feel and understand what you mean, real taste of chicken sandwich!
4. I think that it can be better if you avoid using the same words.
I think it is a very depictive essay. You use many describing words, such as 'tenderness', 'freshness', 'happy', 'toughnss', 'enjoyable'. These words made me read hyour essay easy and interesting. And your main topic is showed clearly. If you revise the part of conclusion that focus on your favorite food, I think it will be a better essay.
ReplyDeleteChicken sandwich
ReplyDeleteIn my senior year, when I was preparing for college entrance examination, I had a very difficult time keeping good condition. Staying in healthy and happy was very important in order to concentrate hard when studying. As I was very tired of studying everyday unable to do what I want, it was not easy to maintain good condition. To my surprise, however, there was one thing that made me feel energetic and eager to study. That is chicken sandwich, which is my favorite food.
There is only one reason to how chicken sandwich helped me study harder and became my favorite food. It is fantastic taste of chicken sandwich. The taste of it really stimulated my desire to eat delicious food in one of toughest times of my life. It is very important to note that at the time I was in a very difficult and harsh situation due to toughness of studying for college entrance examination. I desperately needed something for a diversion and that was chicken sandwich. One day, I decided to eat sandwich for dinner before heading to English class after school. So, I bought a chicken sandwich in Parris bagutte and ate it right away. At first bite, I did not recognize, but at second bite, I was totally obsessed by the taste of it and right away it became my favorite food. Tenderness of chicken, freshness of vegetables, coolness of tomatoes, and softness of bread amazed me instantly. I could understood how delicious food can make people feel happy. The tasty sandwich seriously made me happy and joyful. This could be possible because I appreciate the quality, or the taste of food rather than the quantity. From that day, I constantly ate chicken sandwich and could study hard due to happy feelings.
Although it is quite an irony how I found my favorite food during my hardest time, chicken sandwich helped me a lot when I was preparing for the college entrance examination. Right now, I still am addicted to it and still desire to eat it at least twice a week. In deed, Parris baguette is the place I visit the most during week days, since chicken sandwich of it is the most delicious in my personal opinion.