Can it possible to imagine life without e-commercing, call it differently as online shopping. It is now very common things to modern society. In research, more than 60% of all the American have used the online shopping before. Also online shopping is not only popular but also very useful to our modern life.
First it helps both customers and merchant. Customers can buy everything they want in their room. They don't have to go outside every weekend to buy the equipment. Only what you have to do is just click on the Internet web site, and put them in your buy-list. You just need credit and the bank account. Also in merchant's view, the merchant can sell product everywhere. Before the online shopping is invigorated, the merchant only had to sell their products in near customers so the location where the store was very important. But not now. But it is not always have a benefit. Some argues that the online shopping is more easy to cheat others and cyber-crime became more common because the customers have to buy things only depended on the photos uploaded in web-browser. But that's only a small fault in online shopping. Online shopping can be judged by customers immediately, so credibility is very important. Also, different from the currency, the online always left a track, so if they commit the crime they are easily caught. Also, cyber-technology is developing very rapidly that they are protecting customer's e-commerce.
I am used to online shopping too. Mostly I buy the things like rare game CDs or stuffs that cannot buy on Korea. I always think that it is very useful as one of the customers. So because that there is a fault like easier treat or cybercrime by hackers but These are all protected by the other benefits. So online shopping is the best invention in my lifetime.
your essay has three paragraphs and you include a hook with questioning. your opinion clearly stated in the thesis statement.
ReplyDeletebut if there are more facts that support your opinion it would be better.