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Jang Jiyun
Writing Fri1,2
A friend who always supports me, a teacher who always gives me valuable tips in life, a colleague who is very funny to work with…. There are all examples of the precious relationships in life. Everybody wants to live the life with the successful human relationships. But they often overlook some simple facts to succeed in human relationship. To succeed in human relationship and have wonderful friends, there are two major things to remember.
The first thing to remember is the trust. The trust is the most important thing in relationships. To be sincerely close with someone, you must gain the trust from him. Once you gain the trust, more than half is done. He will share everything with you, depending much on you. If he is someone who is related in your work thing, he will give you every important work. To gain the trust, you should also show him how much you trust him. You should show him that you think him as a trustworthy, sincere person. And also, you should always listen to him.
And the second thing you should remember is the respect. The respect is also very important thing. Everyone wants to feel that he/she is respected by someone. Think in his shoes, think what you've said, and think about every little behavior you did every moment. Think just once more before you say something. Whatever you said or behaved, it should be the respectful act. The closer you get to someone, you should be more considerate.
Those two things are simple, but quite hard to remember and put into action. Even I know that fact. But if you do those two things, I am sure that you could have successful relationships.
It was a very interesting writing. you talk about the how to success at relationship. The two main aspects, trust and respects are also I agree with. The word "everyone wants to feel respected: gives strong to me. But I just wonder how about put more importances on hook and the endings. It could be betters.
ReplyDeleteFrom HyeRi :D
ReplyDeleteWhat I like about this piece of writing is the theme, because I really agree with your opinions about human relationship.
Your main point seems to be to trust and to respect is needed to make successful human relationships.
The sentence "Everyone wants to feel that he/she is respected by someone" struck me because I really agree with this sentence. Maybe this is the most important thing in every relationships in our life.
All the sentences was easy to follow.
The one thing that could make the biggest improvement is that to do not use AND at the head of the sentence. I think this makes your writing informal, if you use other words instead of AND, that will be better.
Thanks ^,^