honghua cui
page 93
FROM THE SECRET BOOK
Have you ever read which books name is THE SECRET? when I first came to korea in last year, I was reading that book. actually i heard that book long times ago, but I did not got chance for reading this book. what I like this book is the positive mind and the most pull powerful law in the universe. and which book chage my life and mind.
Before I read that book I got serious situation, which situation makes me confuse with what I was thinking and stand in forked road. no one can help me, therefore I decided by myself what I want going to be to do. At the same time I am not sure is it correct which I was decided and always makes me anxiety, evernight got sleeplessness makes me can not sleeping well and always got dream in overnight. at that time I got opportunity go to the bookstore and I found THE SECRET book, when I read THE SECRET makes me exciting, and which is let me more positive, which is said that what I decided to do just keep going don't need doubt. that why I get up the serious situation.
The result, just focus on what you want, don't focus with what you don't want, which is from the law of pull in the universe. so since in that time I always think about what I want to do and what I want got it. that is THE SECRET power.
by 200901051
ReplyDeleteThe subject your writing piece is clear. It's about a book that helped you getting a positive mind.
Your writing has plenty of background information which helped me to understand your story.
I especially liked the last paragraph because the message was clear. On the other hand, I found the introduction bit confusing. Actually, I think it contains non essential information that makes the introduction less cohorent.